Wednesday, May 20, 2015
Response to "Online Gambling Is Anything But Pretty"
This article states that gambling is becoming more accessible for people with the new online gambling. This is a major problem especially for those with gambling problems. I also find very interesting how people who live within 10 miles from a casino has a bigger chance of becoming addicted to gambling. They are also expecting this problem to rise among Americans even more than it already is. The weaknesses of this article is that I would of like if they added an example of some and their story, how they dealt or are dealing with this problem. I would have also like for the author to add where is this problem more likely to happen, in what cities. I feel like the title could've been more catchy. It's very boring. People will always look at the title, and if they are curious they'll read it but this title is very like blah. I really like how this article is organize everything follows the flow of the information and also explains everything. The author first presented the problem then at the end the solution or recommendation. The vocabulary used in this article is very adequate for it. It also includes statics that provide more information for the reader. Overall this article is very informative and really interesting.